Feedback on our second draft

We have uploaded the second draft to You Tube for family and friends to look at it and give us any relevent feedback.
Overall the majority of the feedback received was positive, they were very impressed with the quality of our work.
The points they gave were:

• stop motion with bench and heart post-it notes are done well
• the different locations and costumes show how much work has gone into it
• although the split screen isnt perfect they thought it looked very good
• it makes them want to watch the full completed version
• lip syncing was of a high standard
• lighting is very good and natural looking
• some shots were too long, of performer just singing.

We will take these points into consideration to ensure our finished product is of the highest possible standard